Some people think that the main goal of schools should be making children into responsible citizens and good workers, rather than benefitting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The idea of education has been distorted to think students should use their knowledge to benefit society or encourage themselves to be good workers and citizens. But I disagree with

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I think education is a tool that brings you the opportunity to grow as

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individual and develop your capacity of thinking. Most people tend

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education makes you a different person in a good way and

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not necessarily a myth,

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, at

school

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school,

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you learn values like

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, respect, tolerance and many others.

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absoulutely

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have an impact

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the development of students, they can become

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better person and

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the importance of

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resposible

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responsible

, good workers and

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for

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real life in the ethical aspects.

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,

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is just only a side of everything schools teach, when you are a student you can learn amazing things each day like science, history, art,

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and languages

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in order to expand your knowledge to an insane level. From my

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expierence,

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has helped me to be more aware of what is happening in the real world and have my own critical opinion,

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in politics or economic topics. Even though as a student you can learn things that can make you a better person for society, there

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other aspects that can help you

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grow as

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individual

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still being a responsible citizen and worker in

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real life.