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Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. What are causes and solutions to solve this problem?

#pollution #environment
Today's one of the crucial hazardous drawbacks is that it depends
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 nature.Based on two problems,
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of
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private cars and shooting
of
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the
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garbages
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garbage
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 at the sea is caused
of
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by
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 pollution. If
it is
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given a solution to these,
Firstly
people
 have to use public
car
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cars
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 and
subway
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the subway
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 surf.
Secondly
, inside
of
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the
water
, that may be
lake
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a lake
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 or sea,
Government
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the Government
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 give recommendation to protect
of
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those places.
To begin
 with, Being
of
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in
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 everyone's own cars
is leading
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 to some problems.
Initially
,
People
 face
to
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too
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much
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many
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 traffic jams.
Secondly
,
This
 car
work
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works
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 with gas and gasoline. These will affect
to
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the fresh air.
For instance
, In Tashkent city, Most
people's have
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people have
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 their
the
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best cars. At least, twice a day, everyone will go to work and other places where it is important for their needs.
However
, We are going to come to the point of view
, The
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that the
 best choice is for them we ought to multiply metro and public
transports
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transport
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.
Rising
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of
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underground, For being fresh air
it
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is
the much
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very
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 beneficial. Coming to the second cause is that
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the
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Goverment's
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government's
 leaders should mention to the citizens
about
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not to shoot baggages into the sea or lakes.
Firstly
, it will damage
to
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the
water
. As an example, By consuming these, Some
people
 face
to
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the
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health problems.
In addition
,it will bring to pollute
of
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the
water
.
As a result
, Related to
the
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their
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 health, They feel
flue
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flu
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 and the worst thing is,The
fresh
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freshwater
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water
 will be reduced stage by stage.
As a result
 of drink will be insufficient,
useless
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and useless
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.
Moreover
,
Enviroment
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environment
 will see some
damagable
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damage
damageable
 sides. Not only
at
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in
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 the
enviroment
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environment
,
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 but
also
 Inside of alive things start to die quickly, (fish and
tortoise
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tortoises
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 and others.)The best solution is
to
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for
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 these, Leaders
have
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to control
about
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their condition.
Baaicly
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Basically
, Those will comprise young
generetions
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generations
generation
. In conclusion, Some
done
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wrong activities
are spoiled
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spoil
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 of natural
enviroment's
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environment's
environment
environments
 condition. As
those
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is written above,
People
 should follow these rules. After that, they will not have some tricks
during
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while
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 residing. As The
Enviroment
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environment
 is with
people
, Protecting
there
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it
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 is
the
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a
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 great
tasks
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task
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 for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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