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Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should believe on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?

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Sometimes teenagers feel demotivation because they don'
t
 feel interested in what they are learning at school.
This
 has opened a debate about whether students should only focus on the subject they like the most or all the subjects because they need to learn everything even if they are not interested. In
this
 essay, I think it is better for anyone to dedicate their studies to something they are truly passionate about and not what school obligates them to study. First of all, the most popular argument for the people who think students should concentrate on all of the subjects at school is because they need to have a knowledge of every topic.
That is
 in some way true,
however
,
this
 doesn'
t
 work the same for everyone.
For example
, if a boy is interested in learning how to play the piano, paint or act; he obviously won'
t
 be curious about learning math or chemistry.
However
, it is important that in the first years of
education
 every student
,
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 has the opportunity to know what the subjects are in order to choose what they want to focus on.
On the other hand
, if someone already knows what subject they are more interested in or are very good at,
then
 they should be free to dedicate their
education
 to that. Proof of
this
 is teenagers who at a certain point in their lives have to choose a career to study in a university and the majority feel happier in that period of time because now they are dedicating their work to what they really like, unlike when they were studying at highschool
for instance
. But if we keep waiting until university,
education
 will still be not enjoyable at all so
this
 should be changed. Encourage teenagers to focus their
education
 on something they truly enjoy and love has nothing wrong because they can feel more motivated now they know they are doing what they want,
in contrast
 to studying something they have to and not because they want to. Students can even lose interest in finishing their
education
as a consequence
 of doing something they don'
t
 want.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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