Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr. Davidson, I am writing to you to apologize for the inconvenience that has been occurring because of the noise from our end since

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week.

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let me explain the reasons for

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unpleasant situation. Actually, we have been renovating our kitchen because we need more space in it and want modern facilities that can save us time. Since all the family members are away during the day time for their respective jobs and university lectures, we have asked the carpenters to do the

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in the evenings, so we can present and guide them. As they initiate the

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late in the evening, they continue to

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till late in the night, and it causes lots of disturbance. Certainly,

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is not the right decision, and I admit that it was our mistake to choose the uncommon times for renovation. We are wholeheartedly sorry for

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trouble. I hope

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will not affect our relationship, and you will not complain about it to the building secretary. Actually, we have already taken positive action as soon as we receive your letter. We have decided that one of our family members will stay at home for the entire day;

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, the workers will be able to finish the

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from morning to late afternoon. Once you are back from your office, you will not face any more hassle from our side. I hope

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will solve the issue, and that you accept my apologies. Yours sincerely, Sohel Khan

Submitted by sohelghori25 on Sat Oct 07 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

249 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries,owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a possitive or negative situation?

ome people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today, many people don't know their neighbours in large city What problems does this cause what can be done about this .

Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.