Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is sometimes thought by individuals that making tax contributions is the biggest thing that can be provided to society, others believe additional efforts are needed on the top of

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for the longer time horizon. On one hand, it is believed by citizens that their job at most solely comprises paying

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owed to the

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can do its public service works.

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, they are of the opinion,that a single person’s say is not enough to change and/or alter the society.

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, more policing resources are the key to reducing criminal activities, which is possible only after paying

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what is asked by law.

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, it is of the view that responsibilities do not stop right after paying

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. As a person living in society, he/she needs to be a critique of the

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policies for the holistic development of society’s upliftment and growth.

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in, the long run, helps in questioning the rightful usage of public funds by the

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among different sectors.

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, it is believed that without education for sustainable living, monetary resources go into dump

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, additional concerted efforts from individuals are needed more than just the

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people may vary in their opinions,

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, I think that individual responsibilities are only partially done with

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, the majority of it’s with balance and continuous checks and following better living habits and practices.

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