The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity The chart describes the way to generate electricity by using geothermal energy. When looking at the diagram it can be clearly seen the geothermal power station has four main units: the cold

water

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storage tank, the injection well, the production well, the condenser and two equipment, the turbine and the

generator

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. The tank stores cool

water

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, and the condenser, turbine and

generator

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are established on the ground

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the two storage units are situated under the ground parallel to each other. In the beginning, the liquid stored at normal temperature is pumped down into the injection well

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built 4. 5 Km away from the ground level. After that

water

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runs through a tunnel, constructed in the area mainly containing hot rocks in order to heat

water

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at its boiling point.

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boiled

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then

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stocked in a production well. The next step

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aims to produce steam from hot

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then

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pumped up to the condenser on the earth.

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steam is used to operate turbines which give power to the

generator

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. In the final stage, electricity is produced by the

generator

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and distributed to consumers.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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5 paragraphs

200 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

geothermal energy
generate electricity
diagram
volcano
magma reservoirs
deep underground
heat
steam
geothermal plant
turbine
condensed
pumped back
underground reservoirs
transmitted
power grid
distribution
continuous
renewable
volcanic activity

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

You have recently moved to a different location where you experience frequent electricity breakdown. Write a letter to the electricity board. In your letter, -describe the situation, -tell what problems you are facing due to this, -explain what you want the board to do

Some people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?