The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart presents the approximate shift in prices of 3 different metals: copper, nickel, and
zinc
in 12 months of 2014.
Overall
, nickel’s price
changes enormously, while
that of zinc
rises higher. Although
the price
of copper experiences some drops, it goes back to the same level.
For nickel
, the Add an article
a nickel
price
started at 6 percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
January
2014, but it dropped to the
lowest at -3 per Change the word
its
cent
in June
which was the lowest point of nickel’s price
in 2014. However
, it started to rise and remained unchanged at -1 per cent
from June
to September. Also
, it fluctuated slightly before rising to 1 per cent
in November. Then
, it remained stable at 1 per cent
until December.
The price
of copper started at 2 per cent
in January
, and it decreased until the lowest point at -0.5 per cent
in May and June
. Then
, it started rising up until it reached 1 per cent
in July and remained unchanged until September. After that, it dropped a little and went up until it reached 1.5 per cent
at the same level at the beginning in
Change preposition
of
January
.
The price
of zinc
started in the lowest rank at 1 per cent
in January
. In February, it rose to3
Correct your spelling
to
per
Correct your spelling
3
cent
Correct your spelling
per cent
,
and dropped to the lowest point at -1 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
in June
and October. In November, the price
of zinc
increased to 1.5 per cent
, and it ended up in the highest rank in the last
month at 2 per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zinc, price, january, cent, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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