The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart presents the approximate shift in prices of 3 different metals: copper, nickel, and
zinc
in 12 months of 2014.
Overall
, nickel’s
price
changes enormously,
while
that of
zinc
rises higher.
Although
the
price
of copper experiences some drops, it goes back to the same level. For
nickel
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, the
price
started at 6
percent
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in
January
2014, but it dropped to
the
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lowest at -3 per
cent
in
June
which was the lowest point of nickel’s
price
in 2014.
However
, it started to rise and remained unchanged at -1 per
cent
from
June
to September.
Also
, it fluctuated slightly before rising to 1 per
cent
in November.
Then
, it remained stable at 1 per
cent
until December. The
price
of copper started at 2 per
cent
in
January
, and it decreased until the lowest point at -0.5 per
cent
in May and
June
.
Then
, it started rising up until it reached 1 per
cent
in July and remained unchanged until September. After that, it dropped a little and went up until it reached 1.5 per
cent
at the same level at the beginning
in
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January
. The
price
of
zinc
started in the lowest rank at 1 per
cent
in
January
. In February, it rose
to3
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to
per
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3
cent
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,
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and dropped to the lowest point at -1 per
cent
in
June
and October. In November, the
price
of
zinc
increased to 1.5 per
cent
, and it ended up in the highest rank in the
last
month at 2 per
cent
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zinc, price, january, cent, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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