The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The bar chart compares the allocated time for various activities per week by teenagers between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
, however
, some activities' spent hours
increased, watching television had more spent time during the whole period
.
First of all, the hours
that related to going to pubs\discos and shopping increased throughout the period
. However
, teenagers spent less than 10 hours
going to pubs in 2002, this
number increased to almost 20 in 2007. Similarly
, it was the same for shopping, and it rose from close to 5 to 15 hours
. Secondly
, doing homework was a downward trend, and it declined from approximately 13 to around 6 hours
per week from 2002 to 2007. In addition
, during the whole period
, bowling was the most unpopular activity, and teenagers spent less than 5 hours
per week.
Regardless, of all other actions' allocated time less than 25, watching television was always higher than this
and increased throughout the period
. In fact, this
activity's most spent hours
was almost 37 hours
in 2007.Submitted by askerovhamid06 on
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