The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
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The bar chart compares the allocated time for various activities per week by teenagers between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
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,
however
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, some activities' spent
hours
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increased, watching television had more spent time during the whole
period
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. First of all, the
hours
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that related to going to pubs\discos and shopping increased throughout the
period
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.
However
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, teenagers spent less than 10
hours
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going to pubs in 2002,
this
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number increased to almost 20 in 2007.
Similarly
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, it was the same for shopping, and it rose from close to 5 to 15
hours
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.
Secondly
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, doing homework was a downward trend, and it declined from approximately 13 to around 6
hours
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per week from 2002 to 2007.
In addition
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, during the whole
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, bowling was the most unpopular activity, and teenagers spent less than 5
hours
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per week. Regardless, of all other actions' allocated time less than 25, watching television was always higher than
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and increased throughout the
period
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. In fact,
this
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activity's most spent
hours
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was almost 37
hours
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in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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