The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The bar chart compares the allocated time for various activities per week by teenagers between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
, Linking Words
however
, some activities' spent Linking Words
hours
increased, watching television had more spent time during the whole Use synonyms
period
.
First of all, the Use synonyms
hours
that related to going to pubs\discos and shopping increased throughout the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
However
, teenagers spent less than 10 Linking Words
hours
going to pubs in 2002, Use synonyms
this
number increased to almost 20 in 2007. Linking Words
Similarly
, it was the same for shopping, and it rose from close to 5 to 15 Linking Words
hours
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, doing homework was a downward trend, and it declined from approximately 13 to around 6 Linking Words
hours
per week from 2002 to 2007. Use synonyms
In addition
, during the whole Linking Words
period
, bowling was the most unpopular activity, and teenagers spent less than 5 Use synonyms
hours
per week.
Regardless, of all other actions' allocated time less than 25, watching television was always higher than Use synonyms
this
and increased throughout the Linking Words
period
. In fact, Use synonyms
this
activity's most spent Linking Words
hours
was almost 37 Use synonyms
hours
in 2007.Use synonyms
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