Reduce global environment damage should be handle by government rather than people. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays the global
environment
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extremely
damaged,
this
issue ought to mitigate by humans than
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the government
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, Personally I disagree that the harm
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the
environment
should
to
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be skipped by
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society
in addition
,
this
essay will consider that
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feel that for two
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will explore in the following essay.
To begin
with, international
enviromental
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environmental
damage increased
rapidely
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rapidly
in these
recents
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recent
years, it can be clearly seen that the
government
has no intervention in
this
issue, but the
aboriginal
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people
or the nation have the full
responsabilitty
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responsibility
and control to protect their
environment
and keep it safes and clean, Taking the UK as an example, on key
benifits
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benefits
in the UK is the percentage of the
awerness
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awareness
rise and that keep
people
respect the
reglement
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element
of the nature,
such
not throwing the rubbish on the street
as well as
using electric cars that the gasoil cars for not burning fossil fuels because that contribute the atmospheric pollution. Despite
this
, there are a number of significant issues that happen by humans who treat the
environment
in a bad way,
Furthermore
, the
government
should
to
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put terms and conditions to reduce the damage,
hence
,
that
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involve articles on how to protect the
environment
from the harm,
instead
of that the
government
must to put taxes on
people
who use any materials or objects that lead to environmental damage.
For instance
, China has strict terms on car users, factories
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on the nation because these factors contribute
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air quality.
To conclude
, it is frequently said that
global
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environment
should
to
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be handled by humans
tremendously
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because
people
contact with
the
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nature daily,
while
the
governoment
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government
only
have
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the
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to create new strategies and policies, I strongly believe that are supports my point of view.
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