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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans give information about the site of an airport that will be rebuilt in the future to permit new
places
 and new departments. As we can see, there will be new
places
 like car hire, ATM and other
places
. In the future, the sale of departures will totally change in fact it will be a bag drop that will permit passenger to leave their bags. The check-in will be replaced on the right and
moreover
 café will be at the beginning to permit people to have breakfast. Like we can see
this
 leads
a
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to a
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lot of benefits for the passengers. After that, the security that controls
passport
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passports
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 won’t change but there will be lot a of shops and the number of gates will be different.
Furthermore
, to go near the airplane they will build a sky train that improves the velocity of passengers. in the end, when they arrive in the arrivals there will be new
places
 like
café
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a café
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, ATM and car hire.
To sum up
,
this
 new change can lead to a huge benefit and it improves the quality of travelling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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