You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition.  Please describe Competition and prize  About the photograph  Invite your friend.

Dear Safia, How are you? I can not believe that we have not l met since Ann's birthday.So,I am writing to invite you to an
exhibition
.
This
exhibition
will be held on November 18 at 14:00 at the Youth Garden in our city. I did not think that I would participate in
this
contest. I heard about it 3-4 days before the end of the contest and participated. We went to the Crown 1 month ago for a family vacation, and I took a variety of pleasing pictures. The picture shows the crown and the natural phenomena there.I won a family trip to Turkey for 10 days with $10,000 in the competition. I will wait for you. I will be very sad if you do not come to
this
exhibition
. Without you, the
exhibition
will not take place. With warm wishes, Manzura
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