The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear sir , I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention
regarding
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the garbage collection system We have been facing
this
issue
since
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over two weeks in
this
area my neighbours and me Apparently
that
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the trash
container
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containers
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are not cleaned up on schedule
that
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which
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leade
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leads
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to the problems.
First
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problem we are facing
are
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unpleasent
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unpleasant
smells from trash which
mean
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harmful
of
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the environmental
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environmental
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moreover
,
effects
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to
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humans and animals.
Secondly
, many times I see wild animals
nearby
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the trash
lastly
,
view
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in
this
area is not looking good
due to
this
issue the others do not want to live here . As one of the possible solutions, I would like to suggest I want to meet the
concern
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person in
this
issue to discuss
also
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and also
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get him/her a tour
aroung
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around
the area I was thinking it
take
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into consideration. I am looking forward to resolving
this
matter. Kind regards,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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