Giving details of crimes on TV and in the print media can have consequences for society. Some people say that this information should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the number of crimes is increasing. Showing

information

of

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crimes on television and in the

print-media

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can cause consequences the society. Some folks say that these

details

must be blocked. I totally agree with

this

statement, and I would like to discuss why I agreed in the following paragraphs. 

Firstly

, providing

crime

details

on

the

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TV

and in newspapers should be stopped, because

this

might cause demonstrations and chaos. What I mean by

this

is the

information

that is

provided on

TV

such

as

,

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cell

phones

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shops being robbed by criminals could encourage people who watch that data to demonstrate in response to the

crime

that just happened,

thus

causing social unrest.

For example

, Lebanon shared a small

crime

between two students

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fighting each

other's

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behind the school for a trivial reason. But it went bigger than expected, one of the broadcasters stated that the

crime

happened

due to

intense pranks between two of the students.

However

, people created

demonstration

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for the sake of the victim's rights and to create a large

number of

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awareness among students.

Furthermore

,

this

demonstration went on for 5 days, which caused car

traffics

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jams and a big disturbance in the country,

such

as

traffics

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traffic

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cars

were

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stopped, people

are

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getting late for work

also

homes, windows, shops and vehicles

are

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destroyed from the demonstration.

Consequently

, these

details

on

TV

and in the newspapers should be restricted, because it causes social disruption. 

Secondly

, the data

that is

given on television and print media might leak the

information

gangs. It can help

for

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one

gang

to know the condition of the rival

gang

members.

For example

, random channels on the

TV

shows

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that the Bloods

gang

members are getting weak. After that, the Lion

gang

saw those

details

, and from the second day they all fought the Bloods

gang

members to eliminate them. Clearly, that anything includes

crime

details

on

TV

and

newspapers

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in newspapers

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should be restricted.  

Finally

, those who

shares

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information

about crimes on

TV

and in the print, media should be restricted because of the consequences,

such

as social unrest and increased

gang

violence, which is disruptive to

the

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society.