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Some experts believes that it is better for children to begin learning a foriegn language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

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 of development,
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 of people migrate to different countries looking for new
opprtunities
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opportunities
. When migrating to a country for a job or even for a visit, knowing the native
language
 of the particular country would be an advantage. Because of
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 many specialists consider it could be beneficial for
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children
 to learn a foreign
language
 at
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an early
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stage
 of
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their
 school years rather than late. It is considered that
children
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 a higher ability to pick up new languages at an early
stage
 of
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their
 lives. Given the fact that starting to learn early allows the
children
 to master it in
thier
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their
 own time. It
also
 gives a sense of
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understanding
 to the
children
 about the diversity of the
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people
,
cultures
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and cultures
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 around the world.
on the contrary
, to some
children
 learning a new
language
 can be a challenge and it could be overwhelming later on.
Children
 who are in secondary school have the autonomy to
chose
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 the preferred
language
 they like to learn than the primary students. They could
chose
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 a
language
 which could be an investment
to
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in
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thier
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their
 future goals. Older
children
 may have a better environment and opportunities to polish their
language
 as they get more space to interact with
poeple
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people
 and society.
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However
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 learning a new
language
along with
 other academics could be an additional workload for the students.
Therefore
, I believe that learning a
foriegn
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foreign
language
 at an early
stage
 of education gives
better
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a better
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 chance of mastering the
languauge
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language
 in
thier
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their
 own time rather than in
secondary
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the secondary
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stage
 of education.
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