The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.

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The chart gives information about the procedure of changing the foreland to rock stack and stump and new headland, which has a smaller size, by erosion.

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, the topography of erosion can happen if the part of the cliff needs to be in the water and has some infirm rock zone. Whereat, the weak rock part is eroded by water and

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become a beautiful arch cave

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one of the famous tourist attraction

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as Durdle Door in Dorset. After that, the hole is continuously expanding, but it takes a very long time until each side of the cave separates from the other. Eventually, the peak of the headland retreated

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the peak of the stack (the broken part that separated) fell down to some stumps.

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it can be seen that every foreland in the sea or water source is gradually being eroded and turning into stacks and stumps

then

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becoming smaller.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Headland
Erosion
Weathering
Geographical significance
Cracks
Caves
Arch
Stack
Stump
Coastal landscape
Human intervention

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The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.

Nowadays the trend of eating ready made food is increasing. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages ot this outweigh the disadventages