The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.

The chart gives information about the procedure of changing the foreland to rock stack and stump and new headland, which has a smaller size, by erosion.

Firstly

, the topography of erosion can happen if the part of the cliff needs to be in the water and has some infirm rock zone. Whereat, the weak rock part is eroded by water and

then

become a beautiful arch cave

that is

one of the famous tourist attraction

such

as Durdle Door in Dorset. After that, the hole is continuously expanding, but it takes a very long time until each side of the cave separates from the other. Eventually, the peak of the headland retreated

while

the peak of the stack (the broken part that separated) fell down to some stumps.

Overall

it can be seen that every foreland in the sea or water source is gradually being eroded and turning into stacks and stumps

then

becoming smaller.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Headland
Erosion
Weathering
Geographical significance
Cracks
Caves
Arch
Stack
Stump
Coastal landscape
Human intervention

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