the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
This
table gives information about the percentage of five cities in Australia that have different tastes of coffee
and tea.
Overall
, according to
the graph, the cities of Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Angivesd Hobart have a fluctuating number of people who got addicted by ordering coffee
in the last
month period.
However
, people in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart have increasing data by up to 50% about someone to spend their time in Café to chill out. While
Adelaide city has falling-off
50% they choose to take joy Verb problem
fallen off
coffee
in a different way. In the other case, the data shows about a 3% difference in every big city in Australia that prefers to drink instant coffee
. Meanwhile, some citizens in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart chose fresh coffee
this
is proven by the rise and fall information in the chart.
To conclude
, in every big city in Australia society have
a different way of enjoying habitual Correct subject-verb agreement
has
coffee
and tea.Submitted by waauliya011 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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