the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
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This
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table gives information about the percentage of five cities in Australia that have different tastes of
coffee
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and tea.
Overall
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,
according to
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the graph, the cities of Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Angivesd Hobart have a fluctuating number of people who got addicted by ordering
coffee
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in the
last
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month period.
However
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, people in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart have increasing data by up to 50% about someone to spend their time in Café to chill out.
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Adelaide city has
falling-off
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fallen off
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50% they choose to take joy
coffee
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in a different way. In the other case, the data shows about a 3% difference in every big city in Australia that prefers to drink instant
coffee
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. Meanwhile, some citizens in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart chose fresh
coffee
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this
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is proven by the rise and fall information in the chart.
To conclude
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, in every big city in Australia society
have
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has
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a different way of enjoying habitual
coffee
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and tea.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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