the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
This
table gives information about the percentage of five cities in Australia that have different tastes of
coffee
and tea.
Overall
,
according to
the graph, the cities of Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Angivesd Hobart have a fluctuating number of people who got addicted by ordering
coffee
in the
last
month period.
However
, people in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart have increasing data by up to 50% about someone to spend their time in Café to chill out.
While
Adelaide city has
falling-off
Verb problem
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50% they choose to take joy
coffee
in a different way. In the other case, the data shows about a 3% difference in every big city in Australia that prefers to drink instant
coffee
. Meanwhile, some citizens in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart chose fresh
coffee
this
is proven by the rise and fall information in the chart.
To conclude
, in every big city in Australia society
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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a different way of enjoying habitual
coffee
and tea.
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