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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you sugi

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It is common knowledge that we can find many sports
centers
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 in a city, but we cannot deny that many
people
 are experiencing sedentary lifestyles. There are some issues which are affected by sedentary lifestyles and some possible solutions to overcome the problems. It is generally known that less activity can bring a negative side to our
health
.
This
 is because we tend to sit down for many hours and
less
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 movement. One problem related to our
health
 is that
high
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 pressure, our blood does not move well in our body when we do not do any activities. To tackle
this
 problem,
people
 should use one spare
time
 to do sport in a week and they are encouraged to consume a healthy diet, and drink enough mineral water. In
this
 way, society will be avoided by gaining high blood pressure. Despite
health
 issues,
people
 spend their
time
 unproductively.
This
 is because they use their
time
 to watch TV. Sometimes they sleep over
time
 in a day which should be used to do something beneficial for them, and probably benefit other
people
. A solution is for
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people
 to join several clubs like sports and volunteering
,
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 so that they can
bring
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positive
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 impact
for
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 themselves and for
people
 around them.
Furthermore
,
people
 are isolated in spite of communicating with
people
 around them.So joining a club is an absolute way to avoid sedentary lifestyles. All in all, it is not allowed to spend our
time
 in an unproductive way because it will lead to several negative impacts to our life like
health
 issues and isolation. So it is highly important to do productive activities to support our life.
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