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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarse the information by selecting and reportng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two diagrams demonstrate the recent layout of an
airport
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 and the proposal for modification that will take place in the future.
Overall
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, the entire area of the
airport
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 will be expanded to the north and more facilities are planned to be established.
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 the first illustration, there are 8 gates for tourists to get on planes that are accessible by a walkway.
Besides
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, the hall of the
airport
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 is divided into two sections
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 the departure region will a security passport control area on the left and the arrival region with a passport control customs area opposite it. In the west portion, there is a check-in corner
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 the west wall, with which a cafe faces it. Based on the redevelopment blueprint, several transformations will occur in
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 southwest
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airport
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airports
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.
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, 10 extra gates will be constructed in the northern abroad section. At the same time, the walkway will be removed and substituted by a sky train. The cafe in the left lobby will be replaced by the check-in corner and move to the contrary side. The location where the check-in previous on will be situated by a bag drop.
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, on the other part of the
airport
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, several facilities will be introduced involves a new cafe, an ATM and a car hire occupied an extended corner in the southeast.
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