Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, a lot of problems in our world. The environmental
problem
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is the main thing
is
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, Some
people
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think that the main environmental
problem
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of our time is the loss of a particular species of
plants
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and
animals
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. By the
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we have more prominent environmental issues these days. Both
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will be discussed in
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essay.
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, I understand why some
people
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believe that a class of extinction is the most important environmental
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. Whatever, the main
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for
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is that social media or newspapers these days give
people
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much information in the endangered category of biological classification.
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, many
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know that losing any kind of
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plants
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plant
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or
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animals
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can break the food chain, which forms life on
earth
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By gathering
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information for many Sources which only
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about
plants
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and
animals
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can lead
people
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to the thought that species
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is the biggest
problem
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in the environment. On the one hand, I think we have a lot of environmental problems. There are many environmental cases that are more important than class disasters for several reasons.
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, the first
point
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is
that
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the
declination
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of natural resources.
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can be seen globally in a lot of countries that often have wars because of oil reeds The second
point
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is that many
people
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are all around the world. Today we are deprived of freshwater.
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point
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is the most common in the world. As
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the more developing the industry is, the more polluted the water is.
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I agree that the markdown of many categories of
plants
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and
animals
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is an important
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, I am of the opinion that there are more important environmental problems that
people
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need to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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