The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century.

The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century.
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The map above displays information about the changes in the Lakeside town in 9 years from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
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, the town became more of an industrial area than a countryside in the measured period.
To begin
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with, the northwest part of the map depicted 6 buildings in 2000 after a few years, it has increased the number of buildings.
Firstly
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,
instead
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of constructions
such
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as derelict warehouses and old towns, it became an office, university, and car park in the latter version of the side.
Secondly
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, a multiscreen cinema and a shopping centre in the middle of the map replaced the arts centre and residential space
while
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the main residential area stayed the same.
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, on the other side of the river industrial field became bigger and took the place of the citizen's area.
In addition
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, the
lake
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that were related to the river deteriorated into
pond
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.
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, woodland changed to small sizes.
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