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The university will deduct the student’s score for late assignments, opinions and solutions.

#university #student’s #score #assignments
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In universities,
students
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lost
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lose
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point
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points
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 for overdue assignments, in my perspective,
it
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 is understandable since punctuality is
a
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 essential characteristic not only in schools but
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 highly valued in
workplace
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the workplace
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. To support
students
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submit
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in submitting
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 their homework
in
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on
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time
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, there are a few
of
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countermeasures, including
regular
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regularly
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 checking the process of subjects, and allowing
student
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students
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arrange
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meeting
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meetings
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 with educators or mentors when encounter problems. First of all, some
students
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are
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apply
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complain that it is unfair for them to have lower
score
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scores
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due to
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unable
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their inability
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 to
handover
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hand in
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 assignments
in
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time
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. I could not agree with
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 opinions, since young individuals will be given sufficient
time
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 to
complet
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complete
 their tasks as long as they plan
it
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apply
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ahead,
therefore
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, I believe it is their obligation to be aware of the deadline of assignment and take consequences,
such
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 as the decrease in score. On top of that, it is crucial for young people to overcome their procrastination and gain the capacity of
time
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 management before
graduate
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 since
such
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 abilities are crucial for them to be useful for
societies
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.
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, there are various solutions that could address the problems as
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, one of the cogent methods is to set up regular meetings with individuals to make sure the process
are
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 being made
,
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 and be able to adjust the plan
coordingly
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accordingly
 based on the latest situation of
students
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.
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,
professor
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the professor
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 should allow
time
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 for
students
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 to ask
question
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questions
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 when they are unable to complete
it themself
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them themselves
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. To summarise, I tend to agree that it is
resonable
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reasonable
 for educational institutions
regulate
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to regulate
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 a deduction
in
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for
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 those who fail to complete their tasks in
time
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, It could not only help
preventing
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prevent
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people from
a
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apply
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late submission
,
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 but
also
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 helps them to have outstanding performance.
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