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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #music #cultures #ages
From the past to nowadays,
music
is
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has been
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 popular among
people
 and they use the
music
 in their events. Today, individuals claim that
music
 is the best way to connect different traditions and
cultures
 from all countries. I completely agree with
this
 view for some reasons.
First,
each nation has
varieties
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a variety
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 of
melody
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melodies
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 in different kinds of notes.
Also
, they use the local languages in
order
 to make songs so, they can show their
customes
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customs
 and mother tongue to other nations which
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expands
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 their local
music
 all over the world.
For example
, in
Iran
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Iran,
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 there are
variety
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a variety
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 of
cultures
 with different
accent
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accents
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that
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and
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 their singer make local
melody
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melodies
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 in
order
 to indicate their traditions to others.
Second,
people
 can learn new languages by listening to foreign
music
 which can improve their skills.
For instance
, individuals in
German
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Germany
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that
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who
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 do not know
English
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the English
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 language,
they
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apply
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can listen to English
music
 in
order
 to
develope
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develop
 their knowledge.
Therefore
, it is the best way to communicate different
cultures
 together.
Third,
in some
countries
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countries,
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 industry
music
 is very popular among local and foreign
people
 because their
singer
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singers
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 can produce different kinds of
music
 like pop, rock, jazz and other melody.
Furthermore
, they attract all
people
 around the world to their songs in
order
 to share their
customes
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customs
customers
 and lifestyles
in
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of
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 all ages.
For example
, one
the
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of the
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 famous
country
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countries
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 that was developed in industry
music
 is
US
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the US
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 with
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of singers in different genres.
In addition
, they illustrate their civilizations and
cultures
by
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through
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music
.
Finally
,
music
 can modify the world and connect different traditions and
cultures
 together. In conclusion,
music
 has
important
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an important
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 role
to show
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in showing
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 off
customes
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customs
customers
 and lifestyles
in
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of
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 all ages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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