Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture below shows the floor plans of a public library both 20 years ago and how it looks currently.
Overall
, the library is rectangular in shape with
four
distinct areas in the
four
corners of the building and two
passage ways
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, one in the north-south direction beginning at the
entrance
and the other in the east-west direction opening into all the
four
rooms of the library. The main changes currently are
,
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the increased area of the children's
room
and the conversion of the enquiry desk,
in addition
to other services. In terms of
current
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the current
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floor plan, the children's
room
has moved from the northwest corner to the
the
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north east
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northeast
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corner with an increased area, housing sofas,
the
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books
, and a storytelling corner.
Additionally
,
while
there is a lecture
room
at the far
right
of the
entrance
, the cafe and the computer
room
are immediately on the
right
and left of the
entrance
respectively. The corridor to the left houses the reference
books
whereas
on the
right
are the adult-fiction
books
along with
the information desk and three self-service machines.
However
, twenty years ago, the
four
equal-sized rooms in the corners housed the enquiry desk, children's
books
, digital products
room
and reading
room
for periodicals moving from the
right
to the left of the
entrance
. The seating was arranged in the north-south corridor,
whereas
the east-west corridor housed the fiction and non-fiction
books
for adults were arranged
in
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the left and the
right
of
east-west
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the east-west
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passage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • significantly
  • expanded
  • restructured
  • sections
  • facilities
  • incorporated
  • digital catalogs
  • self-service kiosks
  • advanced computer facilities
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • transformative changes
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