Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture below shows the floor plans of a public library both 20 years ago and how it looks currently.
Overall
, the library is rectangular in shape with Linking Words
four
distinct areas in the Use synonyms
four
corners of the building and two Use synonyms
passage ways
, one in the north-south direction beginning at the Correct your spelling
passageways
entrance
and the other in the east-west direction opening into all the Use synonyms
four
rooms of the library. The main changes currently areUse synonyms
,
the increased area of the children's Remove the comma
apply
room
and the conversion of the enquiry desk, Use synonyms
in addition
to other services.
In terms of Linking Words
current
floor plan, the children's Add an article
the current
a current
room
has moved from the northwest corner to the Use synonyms
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
north east
corner with an increased area, housing sofas, Correct your spelling
northeast
the
Correct article usage
apply
books
, and a storytelling corner. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
while
there is a lecture Linking Words
room
at the far Use synonyms
right
of the Use synonyms
entrance
, the cafe and the computer Use synonyms
room
are immediately on the Use synonyms
right
and left of the Use synonyms
entrance
respectively. The corridor to the left houses the reference Use synonyms
books
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whereas
on the Linking Words
right
are the adult-fiction Use synonyms
books
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along with
the information desk and three self-service machines.
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However
, twenty years ago, the Linking Words
four
equal-sized rooms in the corners housed the enquiry desk, children's Use synonyms
books
, digital products Use synonyms
room
and reading Use synonyms
room
for periodicals moving from the Use synonyms
right
to the left of the Use synonyms
entrance
. The seating was arranged in the north-south corridor, Use synonyms
whereas
the east-west corridor housed the fiction and non-fiction Linking Words
books
for adults were arranged Use synonyms
in
the left and the Change preposition
on
right
of Use synonyms
east-west
passage.Correct article usage
the east-west
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, entrance, room, books, right with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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