Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given picture depicts the floor plans of a government library, both 20 years ago and how it looks currently.
Overall
, both the floor plans show that the library is rectangular with four rooms in the four corners of the building and two passageways criss-crossing each other, with all four rooms of the library opening into the east-west passage. The main changes currently are the increased
area
of the children's
room
and the conversion of the enquiry desk,
in addition
to the provision of other services (cafe and lecture
room
). In terms of the current floor plan, the children's
room
has moved from the northwest corner to the northeast with an increased
area
, housing sofas, books, and a storytelling corner.
Additionally
,
while
there is a lecture
room
at the far
right
of the entrance, the cafe and the computer
area
are immediately on the
right
and left of the entrance respectively. The corridor to the left houses the reference books
whereas
on the
right
are the adult-fiction books
along with
the information desk and three self-service machines.
However
, twenty years ago, the 4 equal-sized rooms in the corners housed the enquiry desk, children's materials, digital products section and reading
area
for periodicals, moving from the
right
to the left of the entrance. The seating was arranged in the north-south corridor, with the east-west corridor housing the fiction and non-fiction works for adults on the left and the
right
respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, room, right with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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