the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The bar chart depicts data about the percentage of purchased fresh
coffee
and soluble
coffee
and the proportion of people who visited a cafe for
coffee
or tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, Adelaide and Hobart in a four-week period.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that in four cities,
instead
of Adelaide, the
ineterest
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interest
interests
of those who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea
were
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the most popular,
whereas
the proportion of fresh
coffee
was least common during the whole period in question. Observing the details, in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart attendance
a
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at a
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coffee
shop had the biggest proportion at just over 60%, but it was not as successful as in Adelaide,
just
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at just
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under 40%. As for instant
coffee
,
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