some people say that school should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong.Parent should not only be the ones responsible .To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The

behaviors

Change the spelling

behaviours

show examples

and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

attitudes of the

children

directly affect

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

their future lives.In modern society ,there is a debate

that

Change preposition

about

show examples

the school mentors should

disipline

Correct your spelling

discipline

their

studenta

Correct your spelling

students

student

by teaching good habits and ethical manners ,and

the

Correct word choice

whether the

show examples

parents of

children

should not be majorly liable for

this

. Here, I completely disagree with the statement , and think that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

it is difficult to inculcate positive

lives

Change the noun form

life

show examples

patterns

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

children

by giving

inividual

Correct your spelling

individual

follow-ups

while

completing huge

syllebuses

Correct your spelling

syllabuses

syllabus

and undeniable family

time

and family backgrounds are the vital considerations than schooling periods. First of all, I strongly trust that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

family backgrounds and the rising environments are the most significant

facts

Correct your spelling

factors

show examples

which are direct

affect

Replace the word

effect

show examples

for making well completed and bahaviored

citizen

Fix the agreement mistake

citizens

show examples

of any nations.

For instance

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

numerous

oxford university

Correct your spelling

Oxford University

show examples

researches have revealed the effectiveness of

parents

Replace the word

parental

show examples

and family

involvements

Fix the agreement mistake

involvement

show examples

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

the psychological and physiochological

developments

Fix the agreement mistake

development

show examples

of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

children

due

Change preposition

apply

show examples

to

Change preposition

For

show examples

this

reasons

Fix the agreement mistake

reason

show examples

parental support is

a

Change the article

an

show examples

enormous involvement than any concerns to control and

behave

Wrong verb form

behaving

show examples

teenagers positively.

Secondly

, the

awakward

Correct your spelling

awkward

time

targeted subject

curriculams

Correct your spelling

curriculums

curriculum

for teaching staff is

a

Change the article

apply

show examples

one of huge obstacles to give extra

attainsion

Correct your spelling

attention

for students.

In addition

, the schooling

time

relatively

Add a missing verb

is relatively

show examples

small

than

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

to compare

Change the verb form

compared

show examples

with home

time

because of that ,

elders

Correct article usage

the elders

show examples

of scholars have

considerable

Correct article usage

a considerable

show examples

time

period to inculcate good habits than

educational

Add an article

the educational

an educational

show examples

staff of the schools.

For example

, in Sri Lankan local primary educational teaching guides consist

with

Change preposition

of

show examples

course

Fix the agreement mistake

courses

show examples

works, assignments, lessons and

time

target examinations ,and educational auditors examine the

teacheres

Correct your spelling

teachers

by checking their

professinal

Correct your spelling

professional

progress.

Hence

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

most

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

teaching staff give

their

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

priority

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

their

occupation related

Add a hyphen

occupation-related

show examples

resposibilities

Correct your spelling

responsibilities

by ensuring

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

job security. In conclusion, I would

preper

Correct your spelling

prefer

to disagree with

above

Add an article

an above

the above

show examples

opinion by

consider

Change the verb form

considering

show examples

those facts

such

as the

influvances

Correct your spelling

influences

influence

of the family for the infants ,and the

profession

Replace the word

professional

show examples

difficulties of the teachers with job

reponsibilities

Correct your spelling

responsibilities

and

time

allowcation

Correct your spelling

allocation

allocations

for

this

.

Nevertheless

, without

parents

Change noun form

parents'

parent's

show examples

postive

Correct your spelling

positive

involvement is impossible

create

Add the particle

to create

show examples

a complete person.