Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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in the world. Some people assert that
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countries must invest in
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supporting minority
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importance
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fewer advantages. In
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the opinion. On the one hand, the governments are
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supporting
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, people learn a
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foreign
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their
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that
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more money to
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India has different
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their
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government are
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