This line chart diagram depicts that the number of teenagers in UK follow habit of eating vegetables.

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This

line chart shows the

numbers

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of adolescents in

UK

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the UK

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follow

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who follow

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custom

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the custom

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of eating vegetables.It is clear from the graph that the

percentage

ranges between high and low in all years. ‏

According to

what is shown ,the

percentage

began to rise in 1960. The maximum increase was in 1980

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when the

percentage

was 15%. ‏

Whereas

the

percentage

began to fall in 1980 and

soar

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slightly in 1990.In the period between 19980 and 2000, the percentages

was

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fluctuated ,not constant ،the

percentage

did not exceed 10%. ‏

Then

starting in 2000 the

percentage

increased significantly, and in 2010 it became slightly higher than 10%.In the years 2010 to 2020, the

percentage

was on a moderate path. It did not change much and did not exceed 15%. ‏

To sum up

, we could say that The

percentage

of teenagers who followed a

vegetable eating

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vegetable-eating

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diet in

UK

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the UK

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from 1960 to 2020 did not exceed 15%, and the percentages were variable.