the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who consumed
coffee
and tea in the last
4 weeks. Those individuals were from five cities in Australia.
Overall
, in the majority of the cities, the highest amount of people bought fresh coffee
,while
the lowest percentage of individuals spent their money in a cafe .
Firstly
, regarding places with the biggest fresh coffee
consumption , Sidney and Horbat took the first place , with over 60% of the population buying this
kind of beans. However
, in Adelaide, less than 40% of citizens bought this
type of caffeine in the last
4 weeks. Also
, this
type of coffee
was the most wanted in all municipalitys
except Adelaide.
Correct your spelling
municipalities
Secondly
,the biggest consumption of instant coffee
was made in Brisban and Hobart, with the percentages over 50%. Nevertheless
, in Sidney , this
category represented only a bit over 42%.Yet , the least amount of citizens in all 5 metropolis
went to a cafe for Change to a plural noun
metropolises
a
caffeine or Remove the article
apply
a
tea, being the sortiment where individuals did not consume big amounts of money.Correct article usage
apply
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