Many people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a large wedding celebration. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience
Weddings
are getting gradually competitive with time with many add-ons, events and overwhelming itineraries. It is often argued as to whether individuals should spend exorbitantly on their wedding ceremonies or not. This
essay will discuss both perspectives,
and the pros and cons of doing so.
First of all, having a lavish wedding is the dream of any young girl, and they fantasize about it from a very early age. To elaborate, it is a one-time celebration of a pivotal moment in two Remove the comma
apply
people
's lives, along with
their loved ones, therefore
, many people
try to make it as unique as possible with potentially the best items in each respective segment of the event. For instance
, couples often choose branded items for clothing, famous talented individuals for make-up and music also
an extraordinary variety of fine cuisine for guests, to celebrate their special occasion. This
makes everyone have a good time and remember their unique event while
celebrating their own milestone, which is getting married to each other and often talks
about the memorable times they had on that particular day. Large wedding Correct subject-verb agreement
talk
celebrations
therefore
amplify the special moments in a person's life , subsequently
creating forever lasting
memories, so it is important that Add a hyphen
forever-lasting
people
spend on these celebrations
.
However
, some individuals who have lavish weddings
end up having miserable family lives culminating in domestic violence and in most cases, divorce. For example
, a couple, who would have spent a great fortune on their wedding with many high-end features end up with a partner, constantly creating disputes and arguing, where most females are assaulted and sometimes traumatized. Spending on weddings
Add the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
doesn't encapsulate the essence of getting married or the understanding of each other of whether they can be happy in future or not. In addition
to this
, humans who have small and simple weddings
tend to lead prosperous family lives as opposed to the people
who have huge celebrations
.
To conclude
, leading a successful life after getting married is more important than a single day, packed with many celebrations
and expensive features, therefore
i
disagree with having massive wedding Change the capitalization
I
celebrations
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