The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The given table exemplifies three fundamental consumables namely,
wheat
, maize
and rice
by individuals in four countries. The units are depicted as calories
per person per day.
In an overall
perspective, many people opt for rice
and wheat
, with wheat
being the most popular, as opposed to maize
, which was the least choice.
Cambodians had the highest value among all other countries at 1445 calories
per person per day, for rice
while
Egypt emerged second with 1095 calories
for wheat
. Mexicans had a similar value for maize
, which was the highest among the other three foods at 1083 calories
.
As per the lowest value, it was denoted by Poland which was null for maize
. Wheat
at 18 calories
and Rice
at 19 calories
for Cambodia and Poland respectively was observed to be significant. Furthermore
, the lowest values for Mexico and Egypt were for rice
, with 57 and 501 calories
respectively.Submitted by pasankonagama on
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