People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays the pace of
life
is rapid and not everyone is able to cope with it without any potent life
-changing consequences. Thus
, the majority of society find
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finds
challenging
to go through the adaptation to some Correct pronoun usage
it challenging
live
circumstances.
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. The
enormous number of people Correct article usage
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is
assured that it is problematic to do something new because of the fact that they have never attempted it and all the time have been Correct subject-verb agreement
are
staring
to avoid situations in which people have to push themselves outside their comfort zone. Correct your spelling
starting
Finally
, a multitude has never undergone any difficulties, which may probably bring teachings and an invaluable experience to their lives, and to which they would be grateful. Also
, some personal frights play the
major role in how well you will end up Correct article usage
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with
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in
terrible
situation. Correct article usage
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For instance
, a language barrier or unwish to interact with local
community could lead to self-isolation and distract a person from achieving his goals.
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Initially
, in order to transform daily life
towards better
side and simplify any adaptations, folk have to face Correct article usage
a better
with
their fears, despite any pretexts. Based on my experience, I can say Change preposition
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with
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that
ensures
crowd might reveal all their vulnerabilities for themselves, thanks to what they could clearly comprehend the pitfalls of the specific situation Correct article usage
the ensures
according to
their life
. Based on it, this
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However
, you need to pull yourself together and go through it, otherwise
you will be mired in problems.
In conclusion, in modern society new circumstances are inevitable, so people have to take over the situation Add a comma
otherwise,
instead
of escaping and being scared of the reality that suddenly hit
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