The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the Uk
The line graph represents the changes in accessibility of the modern technical innovations within doors in the UK between 1994 and 2008.
The CD
player
, Mobile phone and the Internet connection showed a
steady growth over the period since it appeared in homes, whilst the DVD Remove the article
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player
diverged the most dramatic changes as a massive jump.
The DVD player
rapidly rose at the beginning in
2002 from nearly 30% to 80%, Change preposition
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however
it markedly flattened out to 2008. At the same Add a comma
however,
time
the remaining technologies picked up moderately from different percentages and all stated below 80%, remaining relatively constant; Add a comma
time,
then
experienced a slight upward tendency to the end of the period.
The DVD player
, CD player
and the Internet connection witnessed a
moderate progress during the first 10 years. Meanwhile, the Mobile phone diverged from the other at the beginning, escalating steadily steeply to 80% until 2004 and Remove the article
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leveled
off by 2008.Change the spelling
levelled
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