The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the Uk

The line graph represents the changes in accessibility of the modern technical innovations within doors in the UK between 1994 and 2008. The CD

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, Mobile phone and the Internet connection showed

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steady growth over the period since it appeared in homes, whilst the DVD

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diverged the most dramatic changes as a massive jump. The DVD

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rapidly rose at the beginning

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2002 from nearly 30% to 80%,

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it markedly flattened out to 2008. At the same

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the remaining technologies picked up moderately from different percentages and all stated below 80%, remaining relatively constant;

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experienced a slight upward tendency to the end of the period. The DVD

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, CD

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and the Internet connection witnessed

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moderate progress during the first 10 years. Meanwhile, the Mobile phone diverged from the other at the beginning, escalating steadily steeply to 80% until 2004 and

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off by 2008.