The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates information about 5 indicators (
population
, population
increase since 2017, density
, land area, and urban population
.) among 3 countries, which are the highest populations in the world. Overall
, China
is the most at
its Change preposition
in
population
and land area whilst Indian's population
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has increase
increase
since 2017 and Replace the word
increased
density
is the highest of three
countries.
With regard to Correct article usage
the three
population
, China
is the most at 1.415 billion which is closely followed by India
at 1.354 billion, whereas
India
's land area is the lowest and even lower than one third
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one-third
China
's one which is the highest at 9.388 million square kilometers
.
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kilometres
Therefore
, density
, which means people per square kilometers
, in Change the spelling
kilometres
India
is the largest at 455 that
is over three times Correct pronoun usage
which
of
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apply
China
's density
at 151.
Regarding population
increase since 2017, India
shows the highest number at +1.11% which is over other
two Correct article usage
the other
countries
indicators. Change noun form
countries'
country's
Urban
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The urban
population
is the most
in the United States at 83%.Correct word choice
highest
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