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Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than the parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's digital age, the vast majority of pupils spend approximately 8 hours a day in educational buildings. Some people believe that when
children
 commence going to
school
,
teachers
 affect their mental health and social development more than the child's
parents
. I totally agree with
this
 statement, because most of the
time
 the child is in
school
 and some
parents
 don't pay attention to their
children
.
To begin
, nowadays, the educational system requires
children
 to be in
school
 for almost one-third of the day.
Subsequently
, the pupil spends his
time
 with classmates and
teachers
. In
school
time
,
teachers
 control students by giving them different tasks and managing their
time
.
Children
 fit in that management and listen carefully to the teacher. It means that
teachers
 teach them how to write, read, speak and even eat properly. Embracing
this
 kind of exercise has a great impact on pupil's behaviour and social development.
Secondly
, there are plenty of
parents
 that don't take care of their own
children
.
Consequently
, the child begins to look for a relationship with other people
such
 as friends or
teachers
. They make
children
 more cheerful and happy, so
children
 start to not listen to their
parents
due to
 their cold appeal. What's more, some pupils tend to think that their
teachers
 are ideal, because the
teachers
 give them needed pieces of advice, especially, when students
in
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 their adolescence. In conclusion, all the aforementioned points illustrate that
teachers
 and mentors have a crucial role in
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 of
children
. When they are in
school
, there is almost no effect from
parents'
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parents
 side
due to
 their absence for a long
time
.
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