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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #school #teachers #influence #parents #development
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It is claimed by
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 that school
teachers
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 are more influential in the development of the thinking system and social
behavior
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 of
children
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 than their parents.
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 the effectiveness of tutors is undeniable, I cannot agree that
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 can surpass the parent's and family's influence. Being confronted with schools and
teachers
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 is one of the greatest steps and most effective events in the
life
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 of every child.
Teachers
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 are responsible for not only teaching school materials but
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 nurturing
children
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 and teaching them how to behave as a member of society.
Children
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, being faced with someone who knows better and
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 has the dominant control, begin to take their
teachers
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 as role models.
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, they might be more tended to follow the tutors' values and
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 patterns.
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, tutors may broaden the viewpoint of
children
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 by introducing them to concepts and theories which they have never faced in their closed family environments. namely, as has been observed in recent decades, schools were the places where most intellectual and value systems have shaped and lasted for
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.
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, the family is the place
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 personality has
shaped
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 first and
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 where they experience most of the real-
life
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 events. So I believe, it would be the most effective factor in the personal and social development of everyone. It is in the family, where
children
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 face with most tangible and actual
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 problems and different methods for approaching them.
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, they might feel the economic crisis effects on the family and watch how their parents have dealt with it, and
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 personal experience may or may not be in
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 of the free market theory they have learnt about at school.
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, based on psychological theories, the belief and
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 personality of each individual is shaped during their first five years of
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,
teachers
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 may never surpass
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 most initiative effect.
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, I believe that despite the significant influence of
teachers
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 in the development of
children
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's social and intellectual systems, parents' effectiveness is
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essential.
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Use more specific examples to support your arguments.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Structured learning environment
  • Cognitive skills
  • Social interactions
  • Pedagogical techniques
  • Moral values
  • Emotional well-being
  • Complementary roles
  • Academic and social education
  • Individualized attention
  • Life skills training
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