The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The presented chart depicts data about the percentage of
car
ownership in Britain for 40 years, starting in 1971. The information is categorized into 4 groups: people having only one car
, two cars
, three or more cars
, and no car
at all.
Overall
, it is evident that the number of people owning cars
gradually increased during the period. It is supported by the fact that the percentage of those having no car
dropped steadily from about 50% in 1971 to 25% in 2007.
Upon taking a closer examination, the British who owned two cars
experienced the most significant increase, reaching almost one-third of the total population in 2007. Furthermore
, a similar pattern was observed in the number of population getting three or more cars
USE SYNONYMS
wagonvanautobusridemachinepickuptruckmotorautomobileconvertiblejeepstation wagonlimousine
It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.
since the percentage rose from almost zero in 1971 to 8% in 2007. Correct your spelling
wagon-limousine
wagon limousine
Lastly
, the chart shows that the number of citizens having only one car
remained stable at approximately 45% throughout the period.Submitted by helma.devina on
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