write a letter to the director .In your letter ,explain why you are writing and assistance they are seeking
I am writing to refer Mr.Jim a
second world war
veteran,who has undergone left inguinal hernia surgery .He and his wife Correct your spelling
Second World War
requires
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require
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a pension
pension
and possible Correct article usage
a pension
home
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assistance
assistant
.Now he is set to Replace the word
assistance
be discharge
today.
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be discharged
Mr.
Jim was admitted on 7 July 2008 with Change the punctuation
Mr
the
complaints of Correct article usage
apply
hernia
for which he has undergone Correct article usage
a hernia
the
surgery.His postoperative days Correct article usage
apply
was
evenful.Now he Change the verb form
were
is being discharge
to Change the verb form
is being discharged
is discharging
home
.
Mr.Jim lives with his wife .Both of them were
lived Unnecessary verb
apply
independent
and Change the word
independently
manage
by his various Wrong verb form
managed
investment
.Currently,Fix the agreement mistake
investments
due to
severe stock market falls,they could not manage their lives as before.His wife
general health condition is good Change noun form
wife's
eventhough
she was unable to contact the health facility because of her impaired hearing ability.So she was requested to them regarding pension.
I would highly appreciate itCorrect your spelling
even though
,
if you could arrange the transport facility for them.Kindly consider them to apply for Remove the comma
apply
pension
.Please help them to arrange a Add an article
a pension
the pension
home
visit to get a clear information
and to provide them with Remove the article
clear information
a piece of clear information
required
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the required
home
assistant
.Replace the word
assistance
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to include a proper greeting and closing in the letter.
coherence cohesion
Focus on one main idea per paragraph and provide clear and organized information.
coherence cohesion
Provide more specific information regarding the assistance being sought.
task achievement
Ensure that the letter fully addresses the purpose of writing and the assistance being sought.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.