The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country.
The line graph illustrates the usage of spreads in different
years
and the figures are shown in grams
.
Overall
, the consumption of margine
and butter reduced dramatically, Correct your spelling
margarine
while
low fat and reduced spreads utilization icreased
significantly over the period.
Correct your spelling
increased
İt
is obvious that Correct your spelling
It
consume
of butter was slightly more than 140 Replace the word
consumption
grams
in the first given year and it reached its peak by 10% in 1986. However
, there is observed sharply
decrease which was between 40 and 60 Change the word
sharp
grams
in the last
mentioned year. Margarine consumption was about 95 grams
in 1981 and after 5 years
the indicator dropped by 15 grams
. Moreover
, the usage of margarine achieved 100 grams
in 1991 and stayed constant during next
5 Correct article usage
the next
years
as well as
there is
Wrong verb form
was
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a faling
faling
in the number of margarine by 60 Correct your spelling
falling
failing
grams
in 2007.
When it comes to loss of low fat and reduced spreads it is experienced that there is not any statistc
till 1996 and in Correct your spelling
statistic
this
year the grams
were less than 20, nonetheless
the index boomed rapidly and peaked marginally more than 80 Add a comma
nonetheless,
grams
in upcoming 5 years
. The figures went down considerable
between 60 and 80 Change the word
considerably
grams
during following
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the following
years
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