The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram detailed above delineates how the bottles are recycled. Looking
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, it is obviously apparent, it comprises three main stages that
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collecting and sorting by hand, followed by processing and cleaning and
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reconstitution into raw materials for
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usage. Processing commences when an individual places their rubbish in
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bin , transported to a recycling center by a truck to sort with the factor of
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,
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compressing to form blocks. Following stage blocks are crushed into pieces called plastic pellets. After that plastic pellets have to
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for
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reuse.
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next stage, plastic pellets are poured into the machine to make small particles and heated
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to form raw material which can be used
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manufacture of products ranging from clothes ,
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to
container
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and
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. These products are themselves usable and the process begins again.
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  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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