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First of all , the clay digged in pits underground surface and then carried to the big roller

#first #clay #pits #surface #roller
First of all , the clay
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digged
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dug
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in
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into
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pits
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the pits
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 underground surface and
then
 carried to the big roller. After that , carried clay
sorted
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 and removed from
metal
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the metal
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 grid where it
will
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 mixed with sand and water . From
this
, mixed texture will
has
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form like plasticine ,
following
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and following
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 that future
bricks
are
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 get kind
of
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shape
of
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similar to each other blocks .
Additionally
 ,raw
bricks
 can be shaped by wire cutter or mould. At the next stage of the process,
bricks
used to be
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 dried for 24
between
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to
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 48 hours in
special
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 oven.
Then
, moderating in klin starts from 200-980C to the highest temperature
1300C
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of 1300C
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.
Afterwords
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bricks
 will pass in turn to colling in
chamber
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 maximum
72
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of 72
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 hours and
minimum
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a minimum
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for
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of
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 48 hours .
It
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 useful to know how much time you need
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to
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allocate to prepare
a
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apply
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brand new
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bricks
 . When all the
ready to using
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ready-to-use
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bricks
would be
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are
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 packed, they will delivered on the truck to other places.
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