The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line graph illustrates the number of
tourists
in Europe in three various locations,
such
as the
coast
, mountains, and
lakes
, over twenty years from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the proportion of overseas visitors in all areas increased;
however
, in the mountains, it rose consistently,
while
in the
lakes
and the
coast
, there were some fluctuations and growth. At the beginning of the period, the
coast
was the most popular area for
tourists
, which was replaced by the
lakes
in 2002,
while
the mountains were the least widespread since 1992.
Initially
, the number of visitors on the
coast
equaled
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40
thousand
and
then
reached the lowest point of 35
thousand
in 1992, after which it significantly increased by the end of 2007. In comparison, the number of
tourists
in the mountain area consistently grew from 20
thousand
to 35
thousand
over the given period of time.
Moreover
,
tourists
on the
lakes
started at about 10
thousand
and rose dramatically in 15 years from that point to approximately 75
thousand
overseas visitors.
This
figure declined sharply in the final years, to around 50
thousand
in 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, coast, lakes, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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