The diagram below the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth

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The given diagram illustrates the continuous
water
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cycle, which takes place in the atmosphere, lithosphere and hydrosphere. The entire
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consists of three main parts:
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evaporation, condensing
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into clouds and the fall of the
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on the surface. Beginning with the evaporation
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, it is happening
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heating
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and approximately 80% of air
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comes from oceans. The resulting
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goes through the
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of condensation and the formation of clouds.
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water
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reaches the
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surface in either snow or rain form;
this
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process
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is called precipitation. As
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can be seen in the picture, the
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can return to the ocean in several ways. The
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can fall into lakes or go via Surface runoff.
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,
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may go under the ground and reach the impervious layer of the Earth.
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, the
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step before returning is to go through
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intrusion, and, after that, the
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of the
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cycle is repeated all over again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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