Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Some
sports
could be life-threatening to humans, this
is why they should no longer be available for people to play. In my opinion, I believe putting a ban on these sporting activities will create some repercussions.
On the one hand, some extreme sports
are hazardous due to
high
risk of severe injury. Correct article usage
the high
For example
, when skydiving and skiing, individuals do not put on protective equipment such
as helmets, jackets, parachutes and knee braces. This
has put a lot of player's lives in unnecessary danger just for recreational purpose
. Many even die trying and performing these activities. Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Furthermore
, some players can get into trouble with the law. For example
, in 2022, Cable News Network revealed that about 65% of skydivers and skiers were commonly prosecuted for defamation of properties
. Fix the agreement mistake
property
This
has caused severe damage to people’s stores, offices and houses.
However
, despite the above arguments, I believe the banning decision is unwise since it will lead to some disadvantages such
as loss of livelihoods. For instance
, extreme sport
athletes will not be able to perform in professional competitions, Change the noun form
sports
thus
not earning prize money that will help sustain their livings. Store owners who sell helmets, gears and knee pads also
have to stop running their business, thereby loosing
profits. Replace the word
losing
In addition
, many individuals will not be able to practice these sports
to relieve stress. This
can lead to disappointment and series
of negative feelings that cannot be appeased.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
a series
i
do not concur with the proposed statement. Change the capitalization
I
Although
,
Remove the comma
apply
prohibition
of participation in these Correct article usage
the prohibition
sports
activities enables people escape
dangers Add the particle
to escape
to
their lives, it should not be put into practice because of the unfavourable impact it causes.Change preposition
in
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