The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The illustration below demonstrates the sales of Spinach, Broccoli, Garlic, Peas and Ginger in the City of Qatari for the years 1980 to 2020.

Overall

, it can be seen that Spinach had the highest figures in 1980 but declined its value towards 2020. Meanwhile, Garlic products have steadily increased their imports for the said years. In 1980, Spinach reached as high as 500

tons

of its products making it the largest item imported in Qatari.

However

, its value decreased from 1990 to 2020 and got below 400 oodles only.

Moreover

, Broccoli reached its peak in 2020 earning 200 plus

tons

from less than 200 oodles.

In addition

, Garlic items which from 200

tons

of production to 400

tons

in 2020 making it the highest sales among the four.

On the other hand

, Ginger has fluctuating values from 1980 to 2020 and only has 200-300

tons

in the market. It earns as high as 300

tons

in the year 2000.

Furthermore

, Peas maintained its figures of less than 200

tons

in the year 1980 to 2020.

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The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses, so people can build houses in their own styles rather than building them with the same style as the old houses in the local area. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?