the best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Poverty

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has become one of the main social issues in many developing

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. I disagree with

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that teaching individuals

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and

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numbers within six years of free education, is the best way to reduce

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. It is true that in order to reduce

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, many economists are needed to be nurtured. Since economics is directly related to literacy and numeracy skills, it seems that the first step toward

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goal is to provide an educational system where these skills can be acquired.

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nurtured

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economists can address solutions to the issue of

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.

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view of solving

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problems of a

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is very simple and superficial

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the ability

of reading

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counting

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being taught in many developing

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for free,

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is still pervasive in these societies. Iran,

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, is a

country

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possessing a quality free educational system and professional teachers,

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struggling with growing

inflations

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poverty

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. There are other useful solutions for

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,

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as creating more job

opportunity

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and introducing an effective tax system.

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, the more job positions offered to individuals, especially the younger generation, the

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people would be left unemployed and,

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poverty

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would be lifted out of the society. The best-known example of

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is China, one of the wealthiest

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in the world, succeeded in creating millions of jobs in recent years. Surprisingly,

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country

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was ranked as the poorest

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in

1980s

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.

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, introducing taxes is another way to remove

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, since the money would be fairly distributed within the society, avoiding

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gap between the poor and the rich. In conclusion, I believe there are better solutions to address

poverty

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in developing

countries

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than focusing on some basic skills.