the best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Poverty

has become one of the main social issues in many developing

countries

. I disagree with

this

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that teaching individuals

reading

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,

writing

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and

using

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numbers within six years of free education, is the best way to reduce

poverty

. It is true that in order to reduce

poverty

, many economists are needed to be nurtured. Since economics is directly related to literacy and numeracy skills, it seems that the first step toward

this

goal is to provide an educational system where these skills can be acquired.

As a result

,

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economists can address solutions to the issue of

poverty

.

Nonetheless

, I think

this

view of solving

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problems of a

country

is very simple and superficial

,

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because

although

the ability

of reading

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,

writing

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,

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and

counting

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being taught in many developing

countries

for free,

poverty

is still pervasive in these societies. Iran,

for instance

, is a

country

possessing a quality free educational system and professional teachers,

while

struggling with growing

inflations

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and

increase

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of

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poverty

. There are other useful solutions for

poverty

,

such

as creating more job

opportunity

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and introducing an effective tax system.

Firstly

, the more job positions offered to individuals, especially the younger generation, the

less

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people would be left unemployed and,

as a

result

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poverty

would be lifted out of the society. The best-known example of

this

is China, one of the wealthiest

countries

in the world, succeeded in creating millions of jobs in recent years. Surprisingly,

this

country

was ranked as the poorest

country

in

1980s

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.

Furthermore

, introducing taxes is another way to remove

poverty

, since the money would be fairly distributed within the society, avoiding

widening

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gap between the poor and the rich. In conclusion, I believe there are better solutions to address

poverty

in developing

countries

than focusing on some basic skills.