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Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some believe
that is
 a good investment for countries to
host
 major
sport
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competions
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competitions
,
while
 others argue that
this
money
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 in other aspects. In the remainder of
this
 essay, both points of view will be explored and will be drawn logical conclusion
at the end
. Nations spend
money
 to become
in
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host
 of big sporting
events
 for different reasons.
Firstly
, some governments expect to
recovery
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 the
money
 that
spend
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is spent
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in
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 the preparations
of
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 big export
events
 during the event of
the
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next months through
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the touris
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touris
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tourism
tourist
 industry. What is more,
others
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other
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 nations invest in
this
 kind of
events
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event
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 with the
propose
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purpose
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 of
promove
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promoting
 their culture
aroudn
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around
 the world.
For instance
, Katar is a strong economy that spent hundreds of
millons
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millions
dollars
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 in the
last
fotball
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football
 Worldcup, in order to
promove
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promote
a good images
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 of their nation and
tradictions
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traditions
contradictions
. Clearly, grand sports
events
 can a play political role and some nations are willing to invest
money
with
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this
 objective.
On the other hand
, the priorities for several
admnistrations
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administrations
are focus
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in improve
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 the quality of life for their citizens.
To begin
 with, the majority of
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goverment
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government
 used the
money
 of taxes to build the structures
necessaries
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 to
host
 big sporting
events
.
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, Bolivia is a South American country with significant challenges in it is healthcare and education system,
as well as
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complicate
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 political landscape. There are
spend
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 public
money
 on the construction of
new
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a new
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stadium
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stadiums
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 could lead to political issues or even civil war. So, for many
people
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people,
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 the priorities are lead to supply basic issues first
than
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then
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 attend
sportig
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sporting
events
. In conclusion, I admit that for
richs
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rich
riches
 countries
become in
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 a
host
 of Olympic games can bring
beneficts
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benefits
, but for many
countries
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countries,
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 the
money
 that
spend
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is spent
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in
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on
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stadium
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the stadium
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also
 can
use
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be used
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 in healthcare or education.
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