Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the advanced
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programming
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by your institution. I am Jennifer Ramos, working as a nurse at the University Hospital, Oxford. I have read on
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our notice board that your establishment has started the
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not formally studied any
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, I have read several about
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programming, and I have
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programmed a
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computer
game. I have been looking
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to formally study
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the
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computers. After I reviewed your learning contents and decided to
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the
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requirement is to complete the elementary
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about
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program informally, I am requesting
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for
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a special exception to
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without elementary. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos
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