The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The presented table and charts illustrate the level of received money from three sources including national government, local taxes and
other
in one the location of Britain Fix the agreement mistake
others
at
2017 and 2018. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, it had
been observed that money has spent in order to salaries, Technology, Buildings and transport fields.
Wrong verb form
has
Overall
, the police office was supported through
Change preposition
by
national
government more than other sources. After that, local taxes Correct article usage
the national
had been
helped them Verb problem
apply
for providing
their Wrong verb form
provide
budget
. In addition
, the
more of Correct article usage
apply
this
income had been spent for
Change preposition
on
salaries
of policemen.
As seen in Correct article usage
the salaries
table
, all obtained Add an article
the table
budget
was 304.7 m and 318.6 m in 2017 and 2018, respectively, which
government supports had Correct word choice
and
main
role in Change the article
the main
this
matter. According to
charts
, Correct article usage
the charts
mentioned
incomes had consumed more to pay Correct article usage
the mentioned
of
officers and staff salaries, which had been devoted 75% and 69% to Change preposition
apply
this
issue from all budget
in 2017 and 2018, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
On the other hand
, technology had the lowest proportion form this
budget
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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