28.Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that a lot of animal types are in extinction, some say that all people should save these

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others would argue that humans’

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are more important.

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the scarcity of some

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might be caused by

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, I believe that the

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that people are facing are more important. On the one hand, humans have done many activities that caused damage to the planet, and

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, some

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are affected too,

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why

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should protect these

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since it is their fault. Another reason is that some

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carry out activities which are important for all living things, and without them,

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cannot be alive.

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, bees are essential for the reproduction of plants, since they take pollen from one place to another.

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, if these

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disappear,

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plants will decrease in huge amounts, and

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, a reduction of oxygen, since the plants produce them.

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, I believe that

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can be solved by solving the catastrophes caused by humans and with the technology that there is.

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, people

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lots of

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that affect all living things in the world,

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as contamination, global warming and climate change. These

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if are not solved, the planet will be increasingly damaged, since there are many issues related. Solving the main troubles, the others will be solved too.

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, it has been shown that the lack of fresh water, the melting ice of the poles and the

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weather, all these are caused because of activities that humans are carrying out. I believe

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point of view is preferable because it will solve a lot of

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at the same time, and will save the world. In conclusion,

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the vanishing of some

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is caused by

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, solving the issues that

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are facing will

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solve the problem of the extinction of

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why it is more important to focus on people’s

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